Lacey–she 11–be with her daddy grandmama back in Tennessee.
And your son?
That Roy–Royal. He live with them DeNeeley’s out in Buxburg with all them foster kids.
But this baby, she my Charm.
For Keeps
The Life of Kylie
Laugh. Think. Cry.
Laugh. Think. Cry.
Lacey–she 11–be with her daddy grandmama back in Tennessee.
And your son?
That Roy–Royal. He live with them DeNeeley’s out in Buxburg with all them foster kids.
But this baby, she my Charm.
A life story in 33 words. Great one.
Thank Bjorn!
You did a great job describing your character in just a few words. Well done.
Thanks so much 🙂
Kylie, this simply melted my heart! What a perfect name Charm would be! Sweet 33 words:)
Thanks Valerie 🙂
There is so much more story here. I hope third really is the charm.
We may meet her again…
I hope she can reconnect with her other children too!
We shall see!
A common story in many places. I hope her Charm stays with her. And what a great job with the dialect Kylie! I could practically hear her speaking! 🙂
Thanks so much Suzanne. I was worried it might be over the top.
great dialect . . . I hope Charm is able to stay.
Me too 🙂
I can hear that Southern drawl smearing the words in the air as they’re spoken. Different, but cool. I like.
Thank you! I grew up in the South and would like to write more about it.
Ya’ll do that, ya hear…?
What a great voice you’ve found here. I’d love to hear more of this girl’s story.
Thank you! I just might have to write more!
Yes, everything you need to know in 33 words. Love the language.
Thank you Freya (I wanted to name my daughter Freya!)
You’re welcome!
I love this, Kylie… so simple, so honest, so sweet… that’s 3.
Thanks Ted 🙂